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i’d have married every bedside witch from here to east dallas

i’d have glistened like a worm to their mescaline psalms

i’d have mired in sinuous wineskin, repentant spectra

i’d Om along in cooing groups, babble with freethinkers

all my endeavors would be gas station derelicts

all of my wrongs would be quasi-continuous

even the over-sought moon would protest

and i wouldn’t recognize one half of the universe
NaPoWriMo 2014 April 30th
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if i hadn't had the drunk luck to meet you by thetaoofchaos is a "beautifully woven, unrelenting piece" (suggester's words). ( Suggested by UnspecifiedUnknown and Featured by neurotype )

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Nabium Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014
wonderful. truly wonderful.
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:iconthetaoofchaos:
thetaoofchaos Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2014   Writer
Thanks!
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brassteeth Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014
Probably the best first line I have read this year...
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:iconthetaoofchaos:
thetaoofchaos Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014   Writer
Haha, thanks!  First lines are the key to making through NaPoWriMo, I've found. 
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Canis44 Featured By Owner Edited Jul 21, 2014  Student Writer
This piece is like, Ginsberg meets Bukowski. :D
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:iconthetaoofchaos:
thetaoofchaos Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014   Writer
That is truly stratospheric praise.  Thanks!
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SaturnTraveler Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
No matter how many times I read it, it never looses it's magic. Great work. 
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:iconthetaoofchaos:
thetaoofchaos Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014   Writer
I appreciate you saying that.  Thanks again for reading. :)
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Karinta Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Student General Artist
Brilliant metaphors!!
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:iconthetaoofchaos:
thetaoofchaos Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014   Writer
Thanks! :)
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