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i’d have married every bedside witch from here to east dallas

i’d have glistened like a worm to their mescaline psalms

i’d have mired in sinuous wineskin, repentant spectra

i’d Om along in cooing groups, babble with freethinkers

all my endeavors would be gas station derelicts

all of my wrongs would be quasi-continuous

even the over-sought moon would protest

and i wouldn’t recognize one half of the universe
NaPoWriMo 2014 April 30th
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Given 2014-06-23
if i hadn't had the drunk luck to meet you by thetaoofchaos is a "beautifully woven, unrelenting piece" (suggester's words). ( Suggested by UnspecifiedUnknown and Featured by neurotype )

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Canis44 Featured By Owner Edited Jul 21, 2014  Student Writer
This piece is like, Ginsberg meets Bukowski. :D
thetaoofchaos Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014   Writer
That is truly stratospheric praise.  Thanks!
SaturnTraveler Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
No matter how many times I read it, it never looses it's magic. Great work. 
thetaoofchaos Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014   Writer
I appreciate you saying that.  Thanks again for reading. :)
Karinta Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Student General Artist
Brilliant metaphors!!
thetaoofchaos Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014   Writer
Thanks! :)
TheWeeLad Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014
this is the kinda thing i'd want to be able to say once I find a woman I can love and who would love me back.
thetaoofchaos Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014   Writer
I really appreciate that. Finding such a companion has proven to be an endeavor worthy of my art and my dreams. I hope the same happens for you.
jade-pandora Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014

And back yet again to do what I had forgotten to do 19 hours ago:  to fave your piece, which holds such lucid moments for me with a cornucopia of artistic grit. :+fav:

thetaoofchaos Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014   Writer
 Thanks, Jade. I appreciate your support. :hug: 
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