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the air was molten
everywhere
you left
it

i see the evidence
cooling in your wake

granite
monoliths
and iron maidens
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vespera Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
visually, this is really appealing. did you do that on purpose? :D
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thetaoofchaos Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013   Writer
thanks! did I make it visually appealing on purpose? :lol: well, yes I certainly try!
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vespera Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you know, like, how the form mirrors each other? or a happy coincidence?
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thetaoofchaos Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013   Writer
yes, intentional.
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vespera Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
good, that means you can do more ;) :giggle:

(seriously)
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thetaoofchaos Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013   Writer
;) I do it when the moment strikes me.
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minninnewah Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lovely imagery! I especially love the first stanza.
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thetaoofchaos Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013   Writer
Thanks!
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imaginative-lioness Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
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thetaoofchaos Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013   Writer
Thanks so much! :D
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