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Lover,

(if, anymore,
we are such things
and not cryptids of Eden
banqueting on apologues
as two magicked statuettes
living in a glyph stone,
frozen in tableaux)

do moments or millennia pass each midnight?
What the Hell has happened while I wombed away my life?
What is left to live on, the bones of ancient mania?
Do they still build man,
woman,
little notes,
firestarter songs to enslave the very sky gods
with the filaments they used
once
to watercolour
the height of you . . .
?
NaPoWriMo - April 1st, 2012

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:iconhalcyonshores:
halcyonshores Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This was so Beautiful, Shane... :heart:


martyrs of wisdom
we weave eternal dreams
bleeding agony
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:iconthetaoofchaos:
thetaoofchaos Featured By Owner May 12, 2012   Writer
Thanks so much for the lovely reply :rose: :hug:
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:iconhalcyonshores:
halcyonshores Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart::heart:
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:iconriparii:
riparii Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012
Hm, I see NaPo works for you.
Beautifully woven, complex language
that creates a picture of ache and disillusionment.
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:iconthetaoofchaos:
thetaoofchaos Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012   Writer
If you say it's working for me then I'll believe you. :)

Thanks for coming by. :hug:
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:iconbrassteeth:
brassteeth Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012
You sweep bloodied hands at ghosts my friend. Punching through them, like they are not there...perhaps they aren't...?
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thetaoofchaos Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012   Writer
Perhaps not! I often wonder if I haven't made up this entire cosmic disaster, phantoms, haunts and all.
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brassteeth Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012
:nod:
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Piscesandthediamonds Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
so beautifully crestfallen...
"What is left to live on, the bones of ancient mania?"
I feel that gaping void for the things that have transpired...the illuminated pieces of dust - the little quiet moments...:heart::hug: I hope you're keeping well, Shane.
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thetaoofchaos Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012   Writer
Thanks Natty. :heart: I can always count on you to understand me. :hug:
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