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I'm open for requested critiques - mainly free verse poetry, but I'll consider other forms. Please note me with a link or links to pieces you would like critiqued, and I will add them to the list.

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matron by InkatMidnight

Little Submarines by ohara1901

Freediving by indiana-w

Name That Baby by xlntwtch

This, My Father Talk by TheGlassIris
Ghost by TheGlassIris
Portrait with Mourners and Childless Couple by TheGlassIris

remembering by ersatz-moon

Wasteland by Infractusgrace

Wings of Glass by Klei-Brandybear

space by Tomea

Rivalry by akkajess

House of Life Lessons by belcanto2

My sorrow by TheIcyGlaceon

Roller Dove by Canis44
A Year Spent With Delirious Wounds by Canis44

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Journal Entry: Thu Aug 7, 2014, 6:12 PM
I thought I would participate in dA's 14th birthday celebration by showing my development as a poet for the 7 years I've been on this website through some select pieces (and so I can score the badge).

beingof all things
be in wonderment

The very first piece I uploaded was a short verse poem called "being" that may still stand today as my most spiritual and philosophical poem.  It encompasses and summarizes my highest goal as a human being, and I thought it appropriate to be the first piece I published on dA. It really set the tone for my entire experience here.

souls high kites with holessouls are high kites with holes, the sky is like a crystal ball
Blue sky harrow:
How lost for adjectives
Are we
To break our fast up there
Sugar, tea, and birdsong?
Of course, kites, souls
Curiosities, wind being free
While we, ground strung Gullivers
Flat beneath the
Colossal eye
We're watchers
Of the wolcen burnspot
Pupil paling
West, always
What do I call myself?
My sex deliquesced
An epicene, I'm a lover of honey bees
And toadstools
With plume
For tongue,
A curling fern:
We slip around like
Chartreuse chimera
In Lilliput ponds.
We dive in as
The tadpoles stop
To blend
At the empty
Of an underwater statue-
Arms like levers:
Blackening the coats
And peeling back
Crystal tortoise-shells;
Stripping time of
Itself –
We see the sky
Where it is skyless;
It remains an opal;
Patternless and
A sunken
In the bowl
Of your

My very first daily deviation was a collab with Piscesandthediamonds called "Souls High Kites with Holes".  That was the first real exposure I received for something I had posted on dA.

Blackbird Pupilsdon’t look at me
with those eyes
speckled brown
bluebird green and hazel-ache
mine, already hollowed out
tapetum breached
and daily leak-
i cannot bear your
knowing glance
you’d see all those wax demonshades
you’d know the clockworks run
i read some other poet,
his words were blackice bludgeoners, soundless suturing socket spikes,  hammergods, each one,
the last cicada to flee the moult.
but he hasn’t the orbs to ruin me.
almost no one has

"Blackbird Pupils" remains one of my all time personal favorite poems on dA.

                                                     hundred nights
                                                (the triple lunes that

My poem "Comforter" was my 2nd DD, and it ended up being one of my most popular poems. It was my first real attempt at a concrete poem.

PetrichorI walk without an errand for the mind.
I must be homeless.
Neighboring enclaves separate our spaces,
belie their builders’ mirthless exhaustion.
Not even necessity can be blamed  
for these mud-struck, brittle gourds,
these quick nests of vasculous organs
pulsing with their peculiar tyrannies,
briefly scuttling from their hovels
like sun refugees
darting into gleaming storefronts
waffled in concrete misery  
all to forestall the end of their souls.
Where can we go when we only want to breathe?
Sitting in a park bench,
trillion-visioned, crowned with galaxies,
I can rest my weary invention.
I sense the weight of an unseen player,
a secret stratagem
as she moves her piece into the glade.
I’m set in place, yet unopposed.
Uncombined with lovers, children,
the slow parade of trees and heat,
I lay beside these stalwarts,
at once, still and hurtling
throughout the travesty of time.
I assemble a cumulus intelligence
near the playground,
threatening Summer with three days

"Petrichor" is the last poem I posted on dA.  It's been a long ride, deviantART, 7 years!  Guess I've been here for over half your interwebz lifetime.


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Artist | Literature
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words cannot describe what i really am

Current Residence: north texas
Favourite style of art: abstract impressionism, free verse
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Thanks for faving the World Suicide Prevention Day article. I really appreciate your support :tighthug:
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Thanks for the :+fav: on the Sept. journal.
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Thanks for The fave! Sorry for late reply, I am not really here anymore!
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Literally speaking, we've never really been here.
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 And hello again, Shane.

Thanks for faving 'Matthew' and his tree fetish.  ;)
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